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"The Storm"
  by LakotaPoet12


There have been times in my life
where it blew like the wind
not to strong, not to calm
going about my life in a smooth, safe manner
when i was happy
i have times that i just dont flow with it
i have to fight, i get so caught up
i feel like there is no reason to keep fighting
im no longer just wind
i am a storm
damaging, yet beautiful
the raindrops are my tears
and the thunders are my screams
there's nothing anyone can do about it
so uncontrollable, so unpreventable
so terrifying...
The Storm
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Date Submitted: Aug 26, 2009 (05:08 PM)
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  Tiku
09/15/09 (09:52 PM) 
the comparison is beautiful.nicely written having a deep feeling.the ending is nice.thanks for sharing.

  Tuck
09/15/09 (09:17 PM) 
Very nice ma...n i think we get a case of the storm sometime...nice message thoa 10+

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