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"---the sweetest thing---"
  by S.L.P.


its
*
just
*
the
*
*
*
---sweetest thing---

to manifest in my soul and
tug gently on
my
worn hearts

---strings---

and its like

the sweetest of a kiss
to ever graze
my

~lips~

flowing from my soul
up and through
my

~fingertips~

cuz see...
its
*
just
*
the
*
*
*
---sweetest thing---

to ever come across
honey and hazel tinged

.eyes.

n'

l i n g e r s
and
s e t t l e s

b
e
t
w
e
e
n

enticing
.thighs.

-sighs-

man...

its
*
just
*
the
*
*
*
---sweetest thing---

and it persists
to wrap itself around
the confines
of a
complexed
.
.
.
mentality

and it

continues on into
my soul and makes its home
as "we" become
one
.
.
.
entity

-smiles-

although i try
time and time again
to explain

i cant get my
heart coordinated with
my brain

to accurately portray
or
convey

predict
or
depict

that to me
sheer elation
he

---brings---

and its his love...

thats
*
just
*
the
*
*
*
---sweetest thing---


*****we now return you to our regularly scheduled programming...back 2 gangsta*****

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Date Submitted: Jan 27, 2008 (08:06 PM)
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  Ncognito
02/05/08 (07:00 AM) 
Beautifully written ma, I'm suprised u didn't throw the Lauryn Hill track on this for extra measure. Nice peice nonetheless..lol

  Branch the poe...
01/29/08 (01:04 AM) 
wow thats like a raw as poem im speechless for real great work

  nywizdom
01/28/08 (11:37 AM) 
wow, very nicely done write. lmfao at that lil notice at the end. but definitely enjoyed this read

  heaviness
01/27/08 (09:44 PM) 
this was just the sweetest thing -- the sweetness of a sun kiss at that -- loved this one poet

  Unethical
01/27/08 (08:18 PM) 
awwwwwwwwwwwwww *feels S.L.P.'s forhead* you sick?? Done internalizing? *smiles* very nicely done

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