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"The unnoticed writer"
  by Gina1982


i see the struggle and pain
scripted across his beautiful face
i wish that i
could be his pink pearl
and over time slowly erase
such agonizing pictures
his words paint for me every day
and like a canvas drenched in colors
my ears soak up
the things he seems to say
as the tip of his pen
tortures his notepad
and like forgotten ripped out pages
i feel the hatred
boiling and mad
for the world i feel so depressingly sad
and my tears persistently run down
like a stream
forever flowing across the ground
they will never notice his depth and insight
but persisting on
he continues to write
not for his moment in the lime light
but because
this flame inside of him continues to ignite
and that passion and fire
burns
so blindingly bright
versus so descriptive and vivid
it is hard for others to see
burning their retinas
to a third degree
and his work is looked upon
as morbid rubbish and debris
but still he writes alone unnoticeably
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Date Submitted: May 21, 2009 (05:16 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 09/03/09 (05:51 PM)
Author: briscoe
Poem Title: WHY HE STILL WRITES

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comment icon  COMMENTS (41)
  Kulmiye
11/21/09 (12:44 AM) 
very skilled poet, love your work girl.

  Simon Dalton
11/14/09 (11:22 AM) 
Fantastic, very well written

  StraY12
11/13/09 (06:15 PM) 
"for the world I feel so depressingly sad, and my tears persistently run down, like a stream" I can see this spoken I can really relate to that line though at times I feel like writing is pointless and that thought runs thru my head...but I keep goin'

  kiler who?
11/13/09 (04:03 AM) 
this is very well contructed and laid out it flows to the very depth of my thoughts the choice of words was a good choice you made it happen keep writing i like it

  Flowet
11/10/09 (01:29 PM) 
When one is destined to do something when it's foretold in the books beyond our miscomprehending-physical-world eyes simply put it happens it's inevitable unavoidable we tend to feel a need to find our reason for being which is proof enough to support the statement I just made so as a writer if destiny feels so it will be all one can do because regardless of what he or she may say underneath whatever motive exist is that inevitability of fate as for you i must show sympathy for your subjected to...
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