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"The Virgin Part II"
A Shani. Medicine Woman. Words and Brokenvegtable Collaboration


  Brokenvegtable:

"My baby"

My hand runs down the side of her face

"You're the sweetest thing"

His eyes grow large as his imaginations runs wild
Thoughts of her, taking in his large member to her mouth
His plan, in his mind seems to be perfect
Now his thoughts remain
What does she need to hear
Before she is willing to give me what I want
I will promise her the world
Even if it is only for tonight

The only question will be
Should I blow it in her mouth
Or all over her pretty face
Where do I want to let her have it

"There is no girl more beautiful then you"

My hand falls under she chin as I lift her head up as our eyes make eye contact

"Baby you mean the world to me, I only want to make you happy"

  Shani. Medicine Woman. Words:

He speaks so softly to me, making me tingle all over.
Just being close to him brings a warm fire to my
body which I can't seem to control. I think of our first time...
It was my gift of love to him. I look into his eyes as he strokes
my face. My eyes are brimming with so much love for him.
I had saved myself for the right one, and when I met him I knew
He was the right one. He never pushed me into sleeping with him,
he had taken my face in those seemingly big warm hands, looking deep in my
eyes and had said, "I won't ask you to do anything you don't want to
do...Baby just let me know when you're ready." I can't explain how that touched
me somewhere deep, and I knew I would give in...I cuddle into his arms,
my entire being feeling like one giant smile. " I love you too Babe." I say
As he kisses me. Between my legs is on fire...drawing him. Strange thing
it is although it was so very painful the first time, I still want him inside of me.

  Brokenvegtable:

I wrap my arms around her so tight
As she rests against my chest
Knowing that I would only but have to ask
And that I would get my wish
To be her first, in the way she has never been with anyone else

"Baby you make me so hard, I can't help but be so attracted to you"

As I could feel my bulge in my pants grow
As I reached down to adjust myself
I saw her eyes look down
And a smile crept up on her face
As I knew she knew that I had become aroused by her

"Honey you're the only one that does this to me"

I let myself grow within my pants
Knowing she would see it moving
As I smile towards her, knowing what she is thinking
And who am I to keep her from what it is she is curious about

"You like what you see, it's ok baby if you want a better look go ahead"

  Shani. Medicine Woman. Words:

I nervously place my hands on his crotch, I can't believe how I make it grow...
I want to take him out and to feel him in my hands, I want to see this flesh
that is hard to my touch...it frightens me and yet I have such a love for it.
I unbutton his pants and slide him out...it seems to jump and grow some more
in my hands. I turn my head sideways and look at this strange hard thing
that I have craved for months. Imagining what it would look like. Imagining
what it would feel like. I begin to caress him slowly, I've only read about it in
Love Stories, so I'm not sure i'm doing it right...he encourages me, saying,
"Baby, your touch is so special, look at what you do to me..." He sucks his breath.
" Here slowly caress my shaft, it's the most sensitive part he instructs...slowly build the rhythm, like this" He guides my hand. "Ohhhhhh..... now, feel my balls..." I feel his balls...I can't believe I'm with a man.
A little guilt comes to settle in my mind and I drop his balls. " Oh no, baby, please...don't stop"
He guides my hand back.

  Brokenvegtable:

Feeling her run her hand up and down my shaft
Makes me close my eyes and just allow her touch to fill me inside
As I long for her to please me with her touch
Wanting this young women to make me feel like a man
To know that such beauty and softness can give me such pleasure
As I open my eyes to see her eager smile as she holds me in her hand

"Mmmmm baby you feel so good, your hand is so soft"

My eyes meet with hers and she sees approval in mine
And I have only to wait for a second before I see her begin to want to experiment
And with that she bends over bringing her mouth close to my dick
As she begins to give it small kisses on it's head
Looking up at me for the approval that she is making me feel better

"Baby you don't have to if your not ready, I want you to want this too"

As she without a word continues to kiss my head
Her tongue peeks out just a bit to lick the top of my head
As she tests the water, before she willingly commits to jumping in
I see her eager to do all the things that I would dream her to do
As I get ready to have your mouth completely around the sides of my cock
I think about how good this will end up feeling
After she learns just what she needs to do

"You make me feel so good honey, mmmm look at how much my dick loves you"

Feeding into her ego as this is what makes her want to keep going
Any women loves to hear the words that make her feel special
Like no one else in the world can do this to me
And it is this that makes gets her to make my dick this hard
I only now have to encourage her to want to make me cum
And tell her that it is how a girl gets a man to show he loves her

"OHHH princess your teasing me so bad, your making me want you so much"

"MMMmmm ohhhhh baby suck my dick, god baby I want to feel you around me"

"You're the only girl that can make me feel this way, I have never felt this way about any other girl in my life"


  Shani. Medicine Woman. Words:

I begin to suck him as he encourages me on..up and down, imitating the rhythm
of two bodies..."watch your teeth...he says ever so gently as not to discourage me.
I look up and smile weakly, saying, "sorry babe." But I want to get good at pleasing him
so I try real hard. sucking, opening wide as I slide up an down so my teeth won't graze.
I try to feel as soft as a vagina...He moans. He's going crazy...as I build the momentum...
I know he's on the brink...but I don't know what to do...

  Brokenvegtable:

"OOOOOOHHHHHHH GGGGOOOOOOODDDDD BBBBAAAAABBBBBBYYYYY"

Her mouth around my dick
Making me feel like a king
And she, could be my queen
As I feel this great sensation moving up and down my dick
Her tongue I feel wrapping around me winding and twisting
My god for her first time
She feels unlike any other girl to me before
Even one's that have done it over and over again
And she breaks the mold on her first try
Pleasing me like no other girl before
Making me to never want her to stop
As I near my orgasm
I still have yet to decide
What to do when I cum
Would she swallow me or spit me out
Would she let me cover her in my cum

"MMMmmmm baby...OHHH mmmm tell me, where to cum"

As my hands grab the back of her head and guide her up and down on me
Running my fingers through her hair
Playing with her ears
As I make sounds I never thought I could
Having a virgin that has never sucked a guy off
Suck me like it's the only thing she can do for me

"Baby...tell me I'm going to cum....honey...I'm gona cum...... quick"

  Shani. Medicine Woman. Words:

He pleads fo rme to tell him...I'm not sure...I've never done it before and I don't know what it will be like...He's moaning and pleading, I know he doesn't want me to do anything I don't want...
so, my heart fills with so much love for this man...my man. I want to please him...I want to make him feel good...I want to show him how much I love all of him...little drops of his fluid is trickling into my mouth...I like the taste of him...it couldn't be too bad but all of it at once?...I panic, something in me says its too soon...just as I hear him scream...I gently remove him from my mouth and his dick explodes on my breast...He jerks spasmodically...spurt, spurt, spurt... lovely milky white juice is all over my nipples as an erection quickens over them...and between my legs twitches for want of him there.

  Brokenvegtable:

"MMMMmmmm baby that felt so good"

I rub my dick as to make sure I get it all out
Knowing that I am now going to be relieved of feeling horny
I look at her half naked and covered in my cum
I see her now for what it was I wanted to do
And that was for her to make me feel good
To make me cum
To give me satisfaction
She will now want to be held
Or touched
But I have lost the feeling
That feeling that would have let me before
But now I have shot my cum
And feel less like being intimate then before
I just want to relax
To sleep this off

"Baby...don't you think you should take a shower to get my cum off your chest?".....

  Shani. Medicine Woman. Words:

Its not like I imagined. I thought he would be pleased. I thought it would bring us closer.
I wonder if I should have, because I want to continue..but he seems distant...somewhere deep inside me...I think I have failed, him. I get up to shower, blazing with desire to feel him inside of me and to have him continue to hold me. I enter the shower and let the water splash over my body.
the warmth of it arouses me even more...
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Date Submitted: Aug 11, 2009 (02:01 PM)
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  lene
08/11/09 (11:01 PM) 
Wow this write was really hot, hot, hot and so real. I like the way you guys shared your thoughts and well as physical motions and emotions. Excellent.

  LateefahFreeWO...
08/11/09 (10:42 PM) 
This write was true to form; I could almost tell exactly what the thougts were going to be next on both sides. Though most may not want to admit it, but there is a difference between the thoughts ard reactions of men who are more visual and physical and women who are emotional and take relationship to heart. Of course there are always exceptions to the rule and of course we're living in a new generations where things are done very different between the sexes. The psychology of it all is undeni...
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  ButterflyDream
08/11/09 (09:45 PM) 
wow...this was interesting to say the least.Not fairy tale driven and idealic...but very realistic picture painted of the akwardness of some's first time experiences.I could say so much more about this...wow,nicely done.

  jerl
08/11/09 (08:12 PM) 
Wow, I could not finish this one, it is a little explicit for me. If I were a married lady it might not be so bad but, alas I am single. You two make a dynamic duo.

  Brokenvegtable
08/11/09 (04:16 PM) 
I could not of done this without Shani. So to her I would say she is a big a part of this as I am. So without her I would stand alone and worthless as to the volume of my words. So I thank her for being the women that she is and SO understanding and able to not let judgement come between her and the expression of her art. To me she is one of the FEW poets that I would EVER allow myself to do a Collab with. It is not the intetion to promote or to degrade either man nor women in this but to show w...
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