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"The Voice of Silence"
  by Mr. RTJ


For no consolation
He pieces together each collocation
Each element plaguing thought
Their martyr
Sacrificing his emotional strain
So they may sustain sanity
Until radical defiance
They feel threatened
Non-compliance
Fear kindling this conundrum
Implausible the notion
One man should shelter the potency to sway masses
Silenced he must be

Lips become encased in an iron clad vizard
Protection from his wizardry
Jagged metal leaving abrasions to the face
Dry saliva and blood
The only flavor he taste
This does not impede the sound of the cry
His ears transform into his voice
The mere loan of the ear
Furnishes all amenity of the voice
Minds once more set to ease

Radical fears again propagate
The final cacophony echoes
The sizzle of coal heated metal
The sizzle of metal pressed
The sizzle now deaf to the smell of scorched flesh
A solid body part now liquefied
Burned
Melted
Sealed
Yet many still healed through his pupils
They yield such understanding
Solace would continue

Volumes speak through his eyes
Moods altered from a simple look
An entrancing countenance
A look so warm
A look so endearing
But to radicals
A look of menace
Metal thread through metal
Coil through a needle
Piercing the superior and lesser eye lid
Agony what the eye hid
Solid grey hue of metal interfered only by red stains
No more luminescence
Just the posterior of a dark eye lid

Sensing near body heat go cold
He now uses body temperature to console
Once again delivering comfort
And when he relinquishes what he has embraced
His arm is replaced by a stump
Decapitated at the bicep
The mutilated left limb
Now paints the ground crimson red
But instead of letting tears seep through and rust the metal coils
With his remaining right
He grasps a stick
He scribbles in the sand
“You can not silence the voice of someone who speaks without sound”

His words are his voice
His actions are his legacy
Left to carry on when he can no longer
How can you stifle a sound which makes no noise?
That which hears without hearing
That which sees without seeing
That which speaks without speaking
You can not silence
The voice of silence

10/11/2007




{Author's note: Couple of points I was trying to hit... but I'll keep those to my self and let your minds play with it. Let's see what you get from it.}
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Date Submitted: Oct 12, 2007 (09:50 PM)
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  ShezsFrsh_Y@D!...
10/12/08 (02:17 AM) 
onli a person who writes strongly can produce something that is beautiful and indescribable at the same time and i think thats what makes this piece so strong, so much imagery and sensory language helps that picture in my mind of them suffering....i understand this kind of writing more now that im taking this creative writing class and this style is alot like some or most of my classmates and i think that jus brings so much more to the table as far as being an individual in yur own writing! 10 s...
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  Freddy
10/05/08 (12:25 PM) 
good job on this write 10

  urban_priinces...
02/08/08 (08:01 PM) 
I`m speechless, Ive got actual tears in my eyes lol , that is such an amazingly ,beautiful ,wonderful, gorgeous.... indescribably good peice , i felt like i was in the place with that person , watching them suffer internally and externally, I wnat to just reach out and touch and warm their heart again and show them love ... this peice is one the best ive read.... despite me not understanding some words i understood it as a whole.... GREAT WORK...Ur a beautiful writer :) Love , Liiciia aka po...
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  PoeticSoulja
12/25/07 (09:55 AM) 
Very clever man..The wordplay and flow were simply brilliant.This really can apply to us as well since poets can speak with muzzle on through their pens.You're definitely a master at your craft.Keep it up.Ten stars

  Ronie15
12/18/07 (02:16 PM) 
I really like this strong write it took me on a journey had my mind racin thinkin what you wrer goin to say next but i really like this its deep

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