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"The Wingless Angel"
  by Underground King


Before me I see an angel

My iris distorts from her glow

The sight of perfection but lack wings

They disappeared with the man before me

Still, beauty is at it's zenith because of her

And i'm four sins away from hell

Hoping that God can overlook the wrongs I have done

So I can hold her close to my body

The chains of sin brake and I drift toward her

I look into her eyes in see visions of pain erase by an optimistic future

I put my arms around her and slowly they turn into feathers

Letting me know she is complete again so she can fly

and to be lifted once more.





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Date Submitted: Jan 18, 2008 (04:34 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  Rob_W
07/04/09 (09:45 PM) 
Props man this was hot son!

  Pip
05/23/08 (09:56 PM) 
nice write! Very interesting vocab. I loved the line "The sight of perfection but lack wings"- very deep!

  Ms. Sincerious
03/28/08 (12:56 PM) 
your use of words is beautiful and the imagery is flawless...

  BabyBoySpik
01/29/08 (01:51 AM) 
this was a great write man..it just sound madd pieceful nd so right..lolz no joke..this was hott..

  beyondangelic
01/19/08 (10:46 PM) 
wow i luv it so simple and so right 10 starz for ya

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