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"things i need to say"
  by LaLa14


listen here baby im not mad at you
but he's got me so frustrated i dont know what to do
he's sayin he loves me
but thats not the way it should be
telling me songs are dedicated to me
when they shouldn't be
he's makin a fool of me
makin me feel bad about the love i see
he told me he'd have me by my birthday
he seemed overly convinced in a way
tells me i need to tell you to back away
so he can have a turn and by my side he'd try and stay
he's always askin me do i love him an in a way i do
but like i said before thats how family's do
yea i love as my brother
but your babies should be the one's i mother
in his eye's i guess sence i've known him longer im spose to love him more
but all he's really doin is makin my heart sore
he tells me he loves me but it hurts for me to hear it
yea i kno it but i dont want to believe it
he asked how long i've known you an where you were from
i dont kno what to think, im confused, is he trying to make me look dumb
he asked me if i loved you but to my surprised i gave no response
i kno in my heart i love you but the things he says are makin me dunce
i dont want to feel this way but i dont know why i do
when truly deep down the one i love is you
but in the back of my mind i cant help but wonder why is it bothering me so
and really to top it off its makin me feel slow
its not him i want its you
but he's got me so frustrated i dont know what to do
he calls me baby an boo
im so lost i dont even know if its a good thing im telling you
last time i mentioned it you said i should do wat i want
for some reason in my mine thats a taunt
you also say many things but some times it seem words are just there
layin on paper or floatin in the air
they have no meaning, man im so confused
for some reason deep in my heart an mind i feel used
but this is to tell you no matter how frustrated he makes me immma always want you
the man i truly love the one i'll say i do too
also to show you i have unconditional love for you
no matter what happens life will push us through
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Date Submitted: Jan 23, 2008 (01:18 AM)
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  Pip
03/30/08 (08:10 PM) 
Very heartfelt and emotional poem. Overall good job 10 stars keep that pen goin

  LoyalHeart
02/10/08 (10:52 PM) 
you did ya thing on this. getting all out there. real true emotion coming out of u. much respect

  gabbybadazz
01/23/08 (11:08 PM) 
nice write. i like it keep ya head up.

  j babi
01/23/08 (09:10 PM) 
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this was so sweet what a lovely write this was terrific

  Irisabelle
01/23/08 (08:50 PM) 
Damn sis. I feel you on this one. This was a great write. I love how you expressed all of your emotions in this one. I really do. Great write.

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