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"think right"
  by drybaggij


unsuccessfully


resting feet
tension meets
demeanor reeks



I


seeks
meek
not for treat
but cuz tricks in sweets
make bad teeth


attempt


to claim exempt
and be audited
noisily like sloppy head
your slurping...
I don't know what the fuck you said


to


yourself
that led to this wealth
of self
discernment
but you learned it



learn


this:
no need for the pout
much less a faux title bout
bout
who can scream and shout
burn this
and in earnest
open your ears and shut your mouth
but then...



common sense ain't common




Spartacus - Ino Hidefumi
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Date Submitted: Jul 11, 2009 (05:54 AM)
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  Myka W.
09/18/09 (12:19 AM) 
Loved this... Great piece

  Sum-Thyng Like...
08/31/09 (02:10 AM) 
lol and yeah common sense ain't common ... NICE!!!

  Lady_Style
08/20/09 (04:29 AM) 
LOL.."common sense ain't common"..love that line..some great ink you got right here, nice work! xx

  big josh
07/26/09 (06:14 PM) 
nice write my brotha

  Tracks of my t...
07/24/09 (07:10 PM) 
love that quote at the end !!! great work

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