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"Thinkin of You, Are You thinkin of Me Too?"
  by deja`vu


I wake up early in the morning,

and the only thing on my mind is you,

I'm thinkin if it's too early to call,

wonderin if you are thinkin of me too,

Do you miss me?

Am I always on your mind?

It's these type of questions that come to mind,

If only you could answer these questions for me,

that way my mind wouldn't be in this questionable state,

it's mid afternoon,

and I'm still thinkin of you,

Are you thinkin of me too?

Do you think the same things I do?

The phone rings,

I pick up,

and guess who it is...
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Date Submitted: Dec 30, 2007 (01:31 AM)
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  Flowet
09/17/09 (06:50 PM) 
Um....i liked it you traversed a simple path not turning too wildly yet swerving as you progressed hopefully the significant other or meaningless now was or is thinking of you would be an idiot among scholars not to

  Pip
04/21/08 (04:28 PM) 
nice write. you really capture the feelings of love very well in your writin. keep it up 10 starzz

  The Hood Poet
04/16/08 (06:05 PM) 
im feelin it this poem is sweet and smooth

  KingArt
02/03/08 (05:58 PM) 
Solid write. After reading this two thoughts come to mind as to the cause of writing this. First, a dawning of love; new and exciting. Second, the ending of a love, that really hasn't quite ended; painful and yearning. But in either scenario, creativity was sparked, setting this beautiful piece on fire. I would love to respond to this. GREAT WRITE

  MarkyMark
01/22/08 (02:07 PM) 
I like this a lot...but it would have been cooler if you went a little longer with it like to the evening instead of mid afternoon. Good write overall though

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