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"Thinking of You"
  by kisskissy






I think of your touching me as the
ocean glides lightly across my feet

I think of you pulling me close and
feeling your heart beating against my back

I think of you as the waves roll in and
out the tide across the sands

I think of how tenderly your lips would
feel against my skin, as the water flows
back out again

I think how wonderful it would be to have
you next to me, an we sit in the wet
sand looking up at the clouds making
figures in the blue skies above

The waves slightly pushing us against
one another, getting wet and laughing
together

I think about putting my arms around you
to whisper in your ear how very much
"...I love you..."
thru our worst storms of all times,

The thunder, rain lightning striking,
crackling making huge monstrous tidal
waves from one side of the world to the
other and yet, the ocean still filled with
enormous beauty survives

“As my love for you darling…”
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Date Submitted: Mar 11, 2008 (03:31 PM)
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  Nilla
06/10/08 (02:05 AM) 
okay, the imagery i this was so on point! *smiles* and the background noise of the ocean.. serenity in itself. brought this piece to life for me.

  Jdawg
06/10/08 (01:38 AM) 
very beautifully written, especially love the ending "...yet, the ocean still filled with enormous beauty survives." very well written. ten starz, well done.

  nayaa310
03/31/08 (01:51 AM) 
this is beautiful....and the ocean waves just mad it all come together. ten stars!!!

  THE LISA
03/18/08 (11:35 AM) 
this is so sweet, the way you describe the feelings in comparison to the ocean's water is so thought provoking.... I truly enjoyed this write and the last line did it all. wonderful write, poet. 10 starzzzz

  theycallmelife
03/11/08 (08:48 PM) 
Sounds so sweet to profess a love in such a manner... and the relation the ocean and love...what it reminds you of...to sweet

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