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"Thirst Pain's"
  by B Easy
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Hunger Pains by babylYric


I thirst for you
You’re like my thirst quencher
Whats the point of action
When you’re my one adventure
See we can grind like teeth
But you’re like my dentures
So as the situation gets tenser
So does our bond
I see you have hunger pains
So I had to respond
Cause I see you starving
And for you I fond
So can you please stop waving your love around
Like a magic wand
See you lookin like Miss Coke a cola bottle
And im dehydrated
Urging for a taste
But still calm and sedated
And I can cure your hungry pains
As I mention earlier as I stated
Cause we have so much in common
As if we were both related
So may I drink you down so
Our love can be inflated
And im not trying to be clever
As we embark on our endeavors
However long it may take, ill journey into whatever
Cause you'll be the one to cure my thirst forever
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Date Submitted: Aug 25, 2007 (02:55 AM)
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  WIZ
04/15/08 (10:27 AM) 
OMG- THIS IS QUITE AMAZING IN MY EYES, U GOTTA TALENT GOING ON IN YOUR VERY SOUL! AND ITS SOUL EXCITING AND ITS PURE!

  harley quinn/a...
03/22/08 (06:33 AM) 
I like the words u used the made me smile that was cute

  j boo
11/07/07 (01:36 PM) 
i like it. good write. 10 starz

  dannysexychoco...
11/07/07 (01:19 PM) 
i like this writing it passionate and sweet i see u coming to her rescue much love to u keep it up i give u 10 stars

  DASHY1
11/04/07 (03:52 PM) 
very nice. u have a nice flow.

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