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"this all doesnt make sense"
  by koolaiid


this all doesnt make sense
why do i feel like giving up all of a sudden
why does it feel like parts of me inside are dying
why am i so confused
something's wrong
why do i feel betrayed and so hurt
why am i crying more than before
why does it feel as if i dont care about anything anymore
this all doesnt make sense
what has gotten me feeling like this
why cant i stay strong
how come i dont know what to do
why am i letting all the unimportant things get 2 me
how come nowadays all i do is sit in my room, write, and listen to my music play
why do i keep letting these punkass niggas hurt me
why do i always change my moods
this all doesnt make sense
why do i feel like im all alone and like no one understands me but me
something's wrong but i dont knoe what it is
this all "JUST" doesnt make sense
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Date Submitted: Dec 25, 2007 (01:40 PM)
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  babygurlsexy09
01/16/08 (01:43 PM) 
awww....all i can say is to stay strong koolaiid. hopefully u get this comment soon!!!! I MISS U FRIEND!!!!

  let-let
12/25/07 (07:11 PM) 
that is so gooooooooood i would give u 100 satrz but it only goes up to 10 so 10 starzzzzz! *mrs lex*

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