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"This Be Me!"
  by WIZ


I surely don't feel human,
as most of you do feel !
I am not of this earthly shit,
so get on out of here!
Pay your own fricken bill!
I've captured all I need too!
And no more I shall take!
Keep your dirty gravel,
and everything thats fake.
Life and lies do not connect,
to what I live to learn!
I am who I am!
And the Lord is all I yearn!
It's not so hard to judge me,
for all the shit that rides,
I belong to no one!
except Our Lord up in the sky's!
So keep your mind,
it's not mine!
I will stay upon His light,
which leads to His divine!
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Date Submitted: Sep 28, 2008 (11:02 AM)
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  foremanlin
11/03/08 (10:07 AM) 
Love the concept, the flow was off a little, started off with a very nice little rhyme and then none, until near the end, ended up a little off center. Other than the words you were feeling caught my heart.

  DaddysGirl
10/28/08 (08:17 AM) 
I know that's right! Great message in this scribe & the flow is on point. Do you, lady! ;-)

  MAVRICK
10/22/08 (04:42 PM) 
Nice write...the flow is on point..stay strong to who u r...thats whats up!

  SoaringButterf...
10/21/08 (02:18 PM) 
This was tight! i am loving your flow..

  Chainz.
10/17/08 (07:50 AM) 
Another write I'm digging no doubt with the flow and the picture painted 10 stars

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