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"THIS BITCH"
  by loyaltyb6


YO THIS BITCH I KNOW
SHE COLD AS STEEL
BUT IF U RUB HER THE WRONG WAY
SHE'LL BUST ON U 4 REAL

SHE'S A REAL PRETTY BITCH
AND SHE DON'T FUCK AROUND
THIS BITCH IS KNOWN
FOR LAYING GROWN MEN IN THE GROUND

SHE HAS A HELL OF A PUNCH
AND AN EVEN STRONGER KICK
AND IF SHE DON'T KILL U WITH A HIT
THEN SHE STILL DO DAMAGE TO MAKE U SICK

AND SHE HAS 6 BROTHERS
THAT STAY WITH HER ROUND THE CLOCK
THEY ARE THE SKULL BREAKERS AND FLESH RIPPERS
THEY MAKE CLOWN DROP

AND HER BROTHERS ARE HOT
I MEAN THEY BURN YA ASS QUICK
BREAK BONES MAKE U BLEED OUT
AND THEY ARE THIER OWN CLIQUE

SO WATCH WHAT U SAY
AND BE CAREFUL WHAT U DO
THIS AIN'T YA AVERAGE BITCH
YA'LL JUST DON'T HAVE A CLUE










this bitch and her 6 brothers






WRITERS NOTE........THIS BITCH
HER NAME IS TRE POUND
BET U THOUGHT I WAS TALKIN BOUT A PERSON LOL
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Date Submitted: Mar 04, 2008 (10:05 PM)
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  Prettysugar10
08/29/08 (11:34 PM) 
Whoa! your writing made me wake up! concept was on point! i love this fly Metaphorical peice! 120 proof!

  Nikki_18
08/04/08 (08:43 PM) 
DEfinitely one of my favs. I like how you kept the flow goin and mislead your readers. I like the creativity. Very unique.

  TRU-IN-DEED
07/31/08 (07:07 PM) 
wow dope concept mama this is a writing style i like to do myself i guess i must have missed this one from you. I see why u felt like this joint needed to be showcased....its hot feeling this joint 10 easy. - T.I.D.

  phillygurl
03/06/08 (02:49 PM) 
Yo dis was hard money ...as the poets say KEEP YO PEN MOVIN f@M

  The Mad Poet
03/05/08 (02:15 PM) 
Excellent write the ending was str8 fiyah boo!! I thought u was talking about a real person too!! LMAO Keep doing your thang boo u got mad skills!!! Much Respect & Love...10 stars and a favorite *muahs*

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