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"THIS EMOTION GRABS US ALL"
  by Survivor


I can just imagin u grabbing my father's hand..firm with respect,
Telling my mom lovely things about my personality she'll correct! lol
Right to the livingroom and I'm hugging you as we sit,
Look'in at both my parents tell'in us over N over the aspects we know are important ;)

I know you want us to do things right,
get married before we kiss goodnight!
And yes, now he's meeting the two ppl who know the most,
I'm their only daughter and youngest but they've never put me last!
Here you come so devenare without a speck of nerves,
Here I am beside you shaking...apparently I'm so good at verbs lol

I've never been with a guy I'd have kids thru,
I remember thinking,"will I be cut out be a mom?" as I first held my nephew
And I still got that picture...That kid has really sprouted!
My mother laughs cuz she always believed kid's weren't ever gonna be what I wanted.

You changed my view of everything...I was quite the pessimestic!
I figured I could hide that,given any cosmetic!
When one day, on the curb watch'in my candy wrapper dive,
Someone would lift me and teach me the value of being alive!

I love you and I've pinched you many,many times...
Because it's true,we can't always trust our minds!
No sense in pinching myself,I even love hear'in you yell lol
I love everything you are...take me at ur will!!!
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Date Submitted: Feb 06, 2007 (10:06 PM)
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  prettyeyezinlu...
02/15/07 (10:19 AM) 
steph that's a good poem. we should kick it sometime. love ya gurl!!

  Ricrac911
02/12/07 (08:03 PM) 
I love this... I feelin it!

  QueenV
02/07/07 (09:02 AM) 
aww

  Phemy
02/07/07 (05:25 AM) 
Wow Survivor!! Now this is what I call a good piece of work!!! Enough to make a favourite:)

  Doughboy
02/06/07 (10:46 PM) 
YO, Survivor, this real nice I like how u capture the poem with your words that make it a perfect visual in my head 4 starz!

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