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"This is....."
  by Sincere6026


It draws you close like a moth to a flame
Hoping and praying that he feels the same
Got you dazin' and gazin', wishin' and hopin'
Slobbin' out your mouth when it ain't even open
Planning marriages, vacations, and steamy sex scenes
Cravin' his love like a drug to a dope pheen
Hollering his name in and out of breath
Breakin' the vibrator cause you used it to death
Got you spending your money every other week
Sending hallmark flowers so your identity won't leak
Don't even care if he might have a lady
As long as you can become his "maybe"
Ladies if you feel what I'm saying, put up your light
Because "this is".......Love at first sight.
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Date Submitted: Apr 06, 2008 (10:32 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 04/06/08 (11:15 PM)
Author: Marvelo
Poem Title: THIS IS.....(MALE PE...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (19)
  Kat Nicole
07/23/08 (02:45 PM) 
nice piece.. love at first sight.. hmmm must be nice. i have yet to encounter this type of love.. but it sounds lovely.... keep writing - KAT

  WIZ
05/20/08 (09:27 AM) 
you sure gots a way with your words, nice job and I feel every word here clear as night and day! your rites rock!

  love-is-the-li...
05/02/08 (07:33 PM) 
i have feel u ths one and keep it up

  2DAMNREAL..A.K...
04/17/08 (12:54 PM) 
lol yo..this was dope...like 4 real..how u put this down and flowed...wow...loved this piece mami..ur wordplay left stain's on my mental! keep it up!

  azzurablue
04/14/08 (03:48 PM) 
Been there and guess what i got'em girl,both times i fell in love.so i am diggin' this poem.

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