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"THIS PLACE I'M IN"
  by 8286741787


THE PLACE I'M IN.

UNFAMILIER AND STRANGE.

NOTHING AT ALL LOOKS OR FEELS THE SAME.

VANQUISHED AND DASHED ARE THE HOPES AND DREAMS.

DEVISTATED BY AN EMOTIONAL T.K.O.

A TWO PIECE GUT CHECK, KNOCKS ME BACK BUT NOT OUT.

AND YET STILL YOUR BARAGE DOES NOT CEASE.

HUNCHED OVER, GASPING TO BREATH.

I SHIVER AND SHAKE.

THE EMOTIONS ARE FELT AND COLD ARE THEY, BUT WHY?

MY SOUL WEEPS, TEARS TRICKLE DOWN MY CHEEK. TRAILS LEFT IT'S WEB OF VAINS.

IT WANTS TO FEEL SOMETHING ELSE BESIDES THIS THING CALLED.......... PAIN.
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Date Submitted: May 03, 2008 (04:58 PM)
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  WIZ
05/04/08 (01:44 PM) 
so we write, you hav ea great way to releaase it too in all your writes, they speak packed with real emotions!

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