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"This Romantic Date"
  by THE REALIST POET


As i look at the clock seeing that i have less than twelve hours to be ready to be in your arms i begin to get ready, a shower first to smell so fresh and clean thirty minutes in and out now im on my way to get dress, picked out the fresh white linen, looking pretty dapper, crisp white clothes from head to toe, who ever known this could happened, on my way to the barbershop to get cut up, in the barber chair in the air her name appears, yes man, she is fine, devine and all mines, now im looking clean as fresh irish spring water, stopping off at the jewelry store to pick up what i just bought her, on my way i stop for a fresh boutque of a dozen of red and white roses, as i walk up to the door, my cologne is what she notices, smiling as we both shine bright, both smelling good, dress nice this is going be a wonderful night, pulled up to her favorite resturanat as i had it shut down, serve her up like a customer yeah "Raheem Davaughn" style, feeding her, and wiping her mouth clean, as we taste champagne, devine beautiful woman who i have on my arm, gorgeous, fine, beautiful and all of the above, kneeling on one knee i wonder what this has becme of, a five carat flawless diamond cut ring, grab her left hand and i place the ring, propose to her, as a tear rolls down her eye, kiss me on the lips, as she yells "Yes, I do!", pleased as we walked away what a way to end the romantic night off to the beginning of part two............
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Date Submitted: May 28, 2008 (09:18 PM)
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  chriswifey
05/29/08 (11:25 AM) 
yo this poem was so beaytiful keep up the good work......i gotta give u 10 starz on dis joint rite here....

  SoConfused
05/29/08 (10:41 AM) 
man this shyt was beautiful. kind of dreamy but at the same time i feel like this could have happened for real. :)

  WIZ
05/29/08 (10:35 AM) 
THAT GETS ME SHIVERS OF ALL KINDS! THATS JUST A BRILLIANT STORY FOR REALS! I LIKE IT! I LIKE IT!

  Shawnice
05/29/08 (10:33 AM) 
wow i loved it and i think it was really sweet and real

  A$k Br!
05/29/08 (10:33 AM) 
Ghetto Romance is always good. xcellent write.

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