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"This Thing Called Life"
  by MR.INTUITIVE


THIS THING CALLED LIFE

Safe it is, when you keep it within

And walk along and drink my gin, what a wonderful life

But my soul tells me, nay, hold it in

THIS THING CALLED LIFE

The walls have ears, and there are hands on the clock

sodomized by death, raped by life

of the music we call "hip hop?

THIS THING CALLED LIFE

and the kool-aid dirt stains never did come out

This is the symphony of my life.
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Date Submitted: May 25, 2009 (04:26 AM)
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  Lil rican sold...
07/31/09 (04:37 AM) 
lol THIS THING CALLED LIFE and the kool-aid dirt stains never did come out especially the red ones lol good job on this piece keep it up 10strz

  ~*!:.Br0wN-Ey3...
05/26/09 (12:08 AM) 
damn this was tight as hell and the fl0w was h0t; instant fave, im def feeling this 0ne..this was mad d0pe; h0mie g0t kuhrayzie skills ;]..10 stars and keep that ink fl0wing ..nic0le* ♥

  malushka
05/25/09 (12:56 PM) 
i like it, i really do, i probobly gonna add all ur poetry as my fav....lol keep it up

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