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"This tiny pond(inspired by al green's "How do you mend a broken heart?")Area 25 song inspiration"
  by ButterflyDream


The rain pounds outside my window
But everyone else sees the sun
They say theres plenty fish in the sea
But I only see a pond of one
Sadly,all I could do is watch your love flow away from me
Now everyone tells me how I need to be
Keep tellin me to just move on
Like I cant still hear our song...
Playing in my head
Like I cant seem to wash your sent from our bed
And God knows I not only machine washed ,but hand scrubed those sheets
Still phantom fragrances invade my senses when I lay down to sleep
Dial your number and hang up before the beep,even though I banished your voice from my head
How can they tell me not to grieve,when forced to bury a love that isnt dead
I remember you said,that only death could break us apart
Never did I imagine you to mean,death in the form of your dying heart
So tell me how do you mend a heart thats so broken?
Tell me how do you keep pride from choking...
And me contemplating calling you everyday
Not caring if your love's pretend...just as long as you stay
Pain got me ready to accept a figment of my imagination
A clone of what we use to be with no hesitation
Ready to make the stage become my life
Just as long as I get to play the role as your wife
These are the thoughts softening a will that I thought as hard
But love can break the strongest of us down,when trying to numb a broken heart.










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Date Submitted: Nov 01, 2009 (07:18 PM)
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  precious225
11/12/09 (09:26 AM) 
WOW I FEEL THIS POEM I LIKE HOW IT FLOWS KEEP IT UP

  Variator
11/07/09 (04:24 PM) 
the pond of one concept is super powerful...im in luv with your brain lol

  The Clinician
11/04/09 (04:53 PM) 
I love your scribes because I can tell that you put your soul into every piece. Loving this scribe my poetess. Keepem coming and I'll keep listening and reading. Peace and much love to ya. The Clinician:)

  Sunkissed25
11/02/09 (02:37 AM) 
oh shit...adding you to my fav list right now. Girl you grasped what its like to loose a first love or the deep lonliness and desperation felt after a break up....girl....yes!

  Psychosis Aka ...
11/01/09 (08:30 PM) 
wow ! not am only im loving this sonnet you touched me with your words mR GREEN would be proud if he ever read this . sad but true ! great read !

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