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"Those Four Lettered Words"
  by Heavenz_Finest


Ya'll please excuse me, it's 2:30 in the morning and I have a lot on my mind and this poem is the best way to express my feelings, so I'm freestyling it straight from my head to the computer, but I hope you like it.....

There are a lot of men who use four letter words to say how they feel, what they want, and what they need. Like "I love, or I'm sick, kiss me, and give me" but today I'm stopping shit right where it starts. It's a new year, and I think I speak for all my sistas when I say the bullshit stops right here and right now. I'm not bashing any men, I'm just speaking the truth cause at one point in time all good men had their days too, so they know that what I'm saying is the truth. To use a four letter word like "love" like it's nothing needs to stop, cause men wonder why women are so bitchy, and why women don't do right, well do us all a favor and look in the mirror and you will have your answer. Us as women act this way cause being hurt by a man that "loves" you is the next worst thing to dying yourself. So stop saying you love someone if you don't mean the shit, and if you plan on using the word make sure you really do love her. For all my ladies reading this if you've never felt like I do right now, you don't ever wanna go through it, and if you have then you know my pain. For the fellas who read this, I hope you read two or three times, and then let your boys read it too. Again I'm not downing the good guys, but the good guys know what I'm talking about, and for those out there that think you can play games for the rest of your life, here are my words for you: GROW THE FUCK UP!!!!
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Date Submitted: Jan 07, 2009 (02:52 AM)
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  Ordained2Chang...
01/07/09 (03:57 PM) 
Well ok... Grow UP! is right.... I never took the time to see why we females act the way we do... that is a perfect reason... I feel you Diva... you should think about submitting this to the LD group page

  DeepThinker7
01/07/09 (03:25 AM) 
Love is an action word. Love moves and flows to erach of us and cuts us both the same at its demise. Much respect for the frestyle expression... Peace

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