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"Through thine eyes"
  by shawn da 1


We were created to see and were made to interpret what is it that we see,

The thing people forget is that what is percieved by one, isn't seen by the other,

Life is what you make of it and can be altered by the eyes that your looking through,

The world has been cruel to many other men so before you attempt to release your soul simply look through thine eyes,

I have been through some of the pains and the trials that we all go through in this life,

before you take your life because your world is collapsing around you and you can't find a way out,

please look through thine eyes so that I can help you climb out of the pit that holds despair and death,

Thine eyes will be here for you to look through and maybe together we can interpret a better solution in the end.
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Date Submitted: Jun 22, 2007 (08:20 PM)
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  MarkyMark
01/11/08 (11:15 PM) 
Loved it...good write

  kisses252336
12/31/07 (10:13 PM) 
i love it...this write was extemely deep and thought provoking. This is a great write. Keep ya pen Moving. 10 starz

  IYUNA
12/29/07 (04:19 AM) 
that poem was deep who is thine eyes? i like the verry first line how you started it off grasped my attention and i couuldnt stop reading i love poetry and yours is good and i wouldnt go to hell for telling you that gods my witness thats the truth.

  Jordan_Victory...
12/29/07 (02:56 AM) 
4 REAL, WOW THAT IS A WONDERFUL CONCEPT, I HAVE NEVER READ ANYTHING LIKE THAT, 10 STZ! CHECK EM.

  jaszzy pooh
12/28/07 (01:43 AM) 
wow...i dont even feel like youre trying to just express yourself youre allowing the your audience to feel you and see your heart baby and thats what makes you a great poet...whoever reads this and dont take greater understanding from this and who isnt encouraged by your words and want to see out of thines eyes there is something truly wrong with them...this is beyond 10 beyond rating

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