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"Tickle My Liver"
  by PnutButta


i got a boss man who delivers
backshots that tickle my liver
sendin tsunami waves up my spine
like it was chilly
watch me quiver

stokin'& pokin' at that spot
feels so good
i hope he never stops
kinda brotha that
makes me wanna hook a steak up
when he is penetrating these candy walls
i know we'll never break up
he loves that I'm a natural woman
my face is never caked up
never hiding behind covergirl
he loves the way god illustrated my make up

He knows I loves him & that magical penis
as much as i love the god given sunshine
which sets my body and soul aglow
we be ohh'in & aah'in like the adiance at a magic show
yes.... please know that my man is the doggonit truth
he inspects my inner layers like a fuccin super sluthe

i swear to god he be buggin me out when he inspects the coochie first
making sure the presentation is correct before devouring his dessert
trailing his tounge around my labia, exploring my waters for treasure
captian jack sparrow could'nt do it any
better

my man reaches those uncharted spaces
making his mark on the map
conquering these places
my heart he has entrapped
fly your flag daddy, fly it high in the sky
let those other pirates know "this bootay is mine!"
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Date Submitted: Sep 26, 2007 (03:53 PM)
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  Big G
05/24/08 (12:14 PM) 
I like that, more women should express how their man make them feel

  JustChuck
04/30/08 (12:42 AM) 
Witty joint with mentally engaging visuals. Had to laugh at the Jack Sparrow reference, lol. You did your thing sexy and classy.

  heaviness
01/10/08 (11:42 PM) 
this pleasures me to know that erotic is forced into the brain in this write and a lucky man lerks the shadows of your pen-- loved the untold and the mind fold

  Tiphani
01/10/08 (09:24 PM) 
I really liked the presentation of this whole thing right here. I loved your style in this one. 10 comin from me to you

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01/10/08 (07:39 PM) 
interesting...this was clever...interestingly playful and cute...not at all over the top...u thought this out pretty well....cute without being corny is hard to do...so is erotic without being vulgar...this project was a success...now let me run over here and dump u sum points....(I hate rhymin poetry...but I like this)...:O)...One

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