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"...Time Hurts...When You Write Alone..."
  by *Miss Toya*
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Time Hurts by ۞ F1 Wesley


Time hurts...
When a soft heart...
Is turned completely...
Into stone...
.
It hurts when the love...
Of your dear life...
Exists only in kites..
And you*re prone..
.
To writing alone...
.
Listening for their ringtone...
Wondering which beat...
Caused their heart to skip you...
.
While you produce...
Liquefied love proofs...
Wondering if their eyes...
Even missed you...
.
.
Time hurts...
.
.
When they *if* and *when*
.
It hurts when they *yeah*
*Ok*...and *I will*
.
Over and over again...
.
And then they don*t...
.
Leaving you alone
Where silence roams...
*Cause they don*t...
.
Understand...
.
How to come for more than...
.
A night of love you...
And leave you...
.
How to come for more than...
A night of fuck you...
Then fuck you...
.
Their leaving...
.
*Cause their life*s...
More important...
.
If i win...
Who*s doing the scoring?...
.
While he*s snoring...
With someone else...
.
Must*ve conceived this concept...
All by myself...
.
.
Time hurts...
.
.
When the same ink...
That flowed over my under...
The eye rings...
.
Can only seep...
.
Through my loving pad...
.
Time hurts when he*s happy...
Seeing me sad...
.
As I wait...
.
For him to take
A foot step toward
The silver plate...
.
*My characteristic trait*...
.
When i*m hurt...
By you...
In a crowded room...
.
I stand alone...
Right where you left me...
Because my heartbeat..
Won*t resume...
.
Until you fix it...
.
I was living for this...
.
And i*ll die...
For it too...
.
Writing alone...
Listening for your ringtone...
Wondering why...
I still hold you...
.
On the highest pedestal...
.
.
.
Time hurts...
But only...
When you write alone...
.
.
.

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Date Submitted: Oct 23, 2009 (03:05 PM)
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  Syndel
10/28/09 (07:03 PM) 
I totally understand this feeling the words spoken have been sometimes a life sentence but at least when you write alone you know its what you really wanted to pen

  santiago\\\\\\...
10/27/09 (03:36 PM) 
while you produce... liquified love proofs.... wondering if their eyes.. even missed you... you are a brilliant wordsmith... so when we gon put someting down together?

  Juicy1on1
10/27/09 (02:06 AM) 
I REALLY ENJOYED THE FLOW OF THIS PIECE AND I CAN RELATE TO THE SUBJECT MATTER AS WELL KNOW THIS FEELING. A FAV.

  mikeb30
10/24/09 (04:56 AM) 
this was sad as hell to read but i loved it..when there are too many lines to quote in a piece i fave it.. so I\'m taking this one ..

  Ladyoflyrics
10/24/09 (03:21 AM) 
brillantly penned toya....

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