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"Timeless Beauty"
by Successful
- This Poem is a response to the poem
Healing Time
by
KGgg
Time has tooking a tour on my life
Time hold up this shit is gone make me cry
Time make me wanna stare at the sky
Time and days keeps on passing me by
Time and my girl has made me realize
Time tell me whats with you and I
Time is precious so you gone me on my mine
Time I havent been treatin you right
Time is something you cant denied
Time just cant see me eye to eye
Time I Just cant let it fly
Time when will you take the time to reply
Time I have nothing left to say so i guess ill skip this line
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Time just cant waste anymore time
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Date Submitted:
Sep 15, 2009 (01:36 AM)
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POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 09/18/09 (03:31 PM)
Author:
KGgg
Poem Title:
Fistful of Tears
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COMMENTS (21)
Shye201
10/30/09 (01:37 AM)
nice....real nice
THE GOD WAR-CL...
10/09/09 (02:21 AM)
Again. Another priceless piece pen with such endearing passionate perfections...........
AGirlNamedJay
10/06/09 (09:41 PM)
Man time gets away from alot of people and before u know it. It runs out and there's no more time to fix what went wrong...nice write
Chinazy
10/06/09 (08:42 PM)
aww this is nice
Hart N. Soul
10/06/09 (01:35 PM)
Nicely said my friend. Very catchy and I like how you personified time. "Time just can't see me eye to eye." Don't think it ever sees any of us eye to eye my friend. Keep inking!
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