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"Timeless Beauty"
  by Successful
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Healing Time by KGgg





Time has tooking a tour on my life



Time hold up this shit is gone make me cry



Time make me wanna stare at the sky



Time and days keeps on passing me by



Time and my girl has made me realize



Time tell me whats with you and I



Time is precious so you gone me on my mine



Time I havent been treatin you right



Time is something you cant denied



Time just cant see me eye to eye



Time I Just cant let it fly



Time when will you take the time to reply



Time I have nothing left to say so i guess ill skip this line



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Time just cant waste anymore time





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Date Submitted: Sep 15, 2009 (01:36 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 09/18/09 (03:31 PM)
Author: KGgg
Poem Title: Fistful of Tears

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comment icon  COMMENTS (21)
  Shye201
10/30/09 (01:37 AM) 
nice....real nice

  THE GOD WAR-CL...
10/09/09 (02:21 AM) 
Again. Another priceless piece pen with such endearing passionate perfections...........

  AGirlNamedJay
10/06/09 (09:41 PM) 
Man time gets away from alot of people and before u know it. It runs out and there's no more time to fix what went wrong...nice write

  Chinazy
10/06/09 (08:42 PM) 
aww this is nice

  Hart N. Soul
10/06/09 (01:35 PM) 
Nicely said my friend. Very catchy and I like how you personified time. "Time just can't see me eye to eye." Don't think it ever sees any of us eye to eye my friend. Keep inking!

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