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"TIRED"
  by THE GOD WAR-CLOUD


My way too tainted self-centered self-awareness
Has my marred self-consciousness
Discombobulated and disoriented

Wherefore today
I'm up and away
Running with thyself
All by myself
Being so self-determined in finding positive insightful ways to save my egocentric self

Searching for all logical ways in self-improvement
For the bettering of self-importance
Because self-sufficient self-made self-righteousness
Is beyond exhausted
Bogged down from always weighing out these burdening atrocious odds
But sometimes thinking way too much on the selfishness of self
Trying the best to get away from negative ways
Embedded deep within a problematic self
Minding my own
While tending to self
Seeking self-reassurance
Desiring to regain self-confidence
Staying secluded
Wanting not to offend anyone else
Ascertaining ways where I can always rise above strife-filled stigmatisms
Which usually derive from prideful's stagnated stuck on stubborn's self
Causing me to realize that self-pity is on empty
And I'm only running from self
Which is highly an impossible unescapable feat

So like I said
Today
I'm up and away
Rediscovering self
Reclaiming my self-respect
All because I'm obtaining encouraging ways
To reform an injured wilted life-lag me
Due largely to the fact
That I'm completely drained from running scared....................



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Date Submitted: Oct 28, 2009 (01:34 PM)
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  blakkrose
10/28/09 (11:27 PM) 
I can soooooo relate to this riqht now in more ways than one my brotha poet. Hate the fact that it's only human nature to be so savaqe like at times and live by the motto "Only take care of you and yours' (in today's realm now it's just take care of YOU). Therefore it is so tirinq when you do the opposite, like qoinq aqainst a current tryinq to find your way to shore. Why must the riqht thinq be so hard to do...

  no shit.itsana...
10/28/09 (02:58 PM) 
yea, thats a tiresome battle...cause no matter how fast you run, self seems to keep up. Change is the achilles to self....get out the ginsu and cut shit.

  Successful
10/28/09 (01:40 PM) 
hey hey hey big bro sorry i havin been reading up on you but that picture is sick and your word omg it was on point loved the lesson in this write my brother you already no you need to keep moving yo pen

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