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"©To My Heart"
  by dHA BaddEStt biiTChh


©To My Heart
February 3rd, 2009

… I pledged allegiance to my heart.
Fragile, given to me put together.
Never to be stolen & crushed, but to be found.
I pledged allegiance to my heart.
Promise I’d acknowledge it,
That neglection would never come its way
For I never longed such trauma & damaged.
I pledged allegiance to my heart.
Said I’d follow you --
But played victim & trailed behind him.
I pledged allegiance to my heart,
But he came & tore my pledge apart.
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Date Submitted: Mar 22, 2009 (06:28 PM)
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  azuleyez
06/24/09 (03:36 AM) 
if i had a special way of givin you props for this i'd do so. this is fire though. i like the repetition of the phrase "I pledged allegiance to my heart."

  Lyn
04/12/09 (09:28 PM) 
Funny how you think you have control and when you realize you dont its to late. real talk 100%

  J3LLYB3AN
04/12/09 (08:54 PM) 
concept was pretty freakin' awesome and the way you did this..niice hun..

  Ms. Smith
04/11/09 (09:44 PM) 
Yes, they are good for that...nice write.

  Sweet Mama
04/07/09 (12:23 AM) 
i feel this . i give you 10'

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