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"To Triumph You Must Persist"
  by rhythmicsoul


Which way is up, he dont know
But knowin a way, he must go...
because he's chasin the perfect dream
One that consist of livin above his means

Now he's at a fork in the road
And bearing the expectations of family is a heavy load
Does he follow the mind and do whats safe?
Or to follow his heart for his soul's sake?

The poor boy never had a chance
So passionate, yet too scared to take a stance
Hoping all falls into place
And the pure love will equate to haste

Confused, he kneeled down and prayed beside his bed
Then his momma came to him and said
To triumph you must persist
Where there is fear, faith can not exist
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Date Submitted: Apr 26, 2008 (10:28 PM)
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  RedLoveSong
02/10/09 (05:09 PM) 
Very inspirational message...keep sharing your wisdom...

  nito pio
05/05/08 (12:14 PM) 
i really like this davion, your words are amazing.

  piss a mofo of...
05/02/08 (09:13 AM) 
i see my Brotha is at it again...sometimes it is just plain telepathy between us two...the words spoken have uplifted the spirit of a soldier to continue to fight the fight that dwells within for ..."where there is fear, faith can not exist"!!! always a pleasure to hear from your pen Bro!

  Syndel
04/27/08 (09:19 AM) 
very tight and the message so clear anything worth having is worth waiting for and fear an faith cannot live in the same house I do enjoy your pen

  Ms. Hollywood
04/27/08 (04:18 AM) 
i meant to say tend... but you get me....

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