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"together apart"
  by ~*~itti~bitti~*~


when did you realize we wont going to work?
was it after you said you loved me or at first?
we been together for sometime and i kno it may get hard
but if you knew we wouldnt finish,
why did you even start...
to speak
to me
knowing we would never be
why did you let me fall completely head over heels for you,
just to find out it was only because i tripped over your shoes.
did i become old news?
was i just fun to talk to?
..something to pass the time while you figured things out?
does the fact that i love you even count?
you expect me to leave as easily as you did
but i cant just pack up and forget this...
ever happened.

i remember when i first met you, you had already lied.
i shoulda known then that i shouldnt have even tried.
i must admit you were worth the cries
i thought wed last forever but i guess this is goodbye.

i wont completely blame you for our ending
i wasted to much time we coulda been spending.
so from here on out just remember you have my heart...
even though, were together apart.
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Date Submitted: Jan 16, 2009 (10:39 AM)
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  UnMasked
11/02/09 (07:09 PM) 
yeah there were times ii tripped over some shoes...dame and ii thought ii was really falling <<-_->> it is best that everyone agrees that together they're in at being apart

  Ordained2Chang...
11/02/09 (03:40 PM) 
Together Apart... an accurate and well deserved conclusion... Reminds me of a piece, "We Never Were"... You're not alone with this piece at all

  *Jazique*
11/01/09 (03:35 PM) 
Wow...I love this...this is def. from experience, I could feel the emotion...I hate when relationships are like this....what a waste of time...

  ash_g
07/27/09 (08:08 AM) 
=^O!! i love this write.. i am like.. feeling this RIGHT now with my ex..bt we were together for a year..he has a chick i got a man..but neither are happy..he wants me and i want him but we r wrapped up in somebody else..this is a fave -♥ ash

  big josh
03/11/09 (07:42 PM) 
yo dis right here was nothin but good ma

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