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"Tongue Tied"
  by Poetic Aquarian
  - This Poem is a response to the poem ~Keep it on the low~ by shaybaby69


Caramel to the left
Chocolate to the right
Just how do I take these two treats
And give them something to remember tonight?

See the caramel has a sweet taste
Both above and below the waist
But we all know chocolate sticks to your teeth
Plus between the sheets she a beast

Before I can strategize on how to devour such delacacies
The growling of my stomach silences me
So fuck it I'll go for what I know, putting the chocolate to my tongue
Then dipping my fingers into the caramel flavored one

Both taste sweet enough to rot my teeth and make them fall out
But hell my tongue can't get enough of their taste's down south
Time to indudlge into the caramel for a spell
Sending thoughts and feelings opposite of the word hell

But I think got the attitudes of these two confused
Cause they both showing beast potential when they receive my tongue tool
A pool of natural essence and the odor of pure passion has been created
We all surprised by the turn of events, but insinuated

With one another to keep going for that climatic orgasmic state
One wants it hard, from the back, a few smacks on the ass until they can't take
It no more, the other want me on top whether it be on the bed or the floor
So I bend one over, place the other on top, and give em' both what they asking for

Back shots, tongue strokes, orgasms like the sound of thunder and lighting
Switching positions, using all the tricks of the trade, damn its so exciting
Sounds inviting but only 2 have been chosen to join this sensual game
Candy B and Shaybaby; I bet I can get at least one to say my name
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Date Submitted: Sep 05, 2007 (05:25 PM)
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  Candy Girl
02/21/08 (08:59 AM) 
i gotta give it up to u boo! u kno how to make ur write come to life! my fav!

  Kay Bee
01/09/08 (12:59 PM) 
Wow

  candy-b
09/05/07 (06:52 PM) 
oh my damn...you had me with this one...damn near had me humpin my CPU...shiiid you already know you gettin a callabo response...good write luv

  shaybaby69
09/05/07 (05:29 PM) 
Cory you already know what it is baby got damn all i know is me and Candy gone have to double up on you and see if you can come back after that (although i know that imagination is something serious) you know i love ya lol great write gotta fav it and please believe we comin back fa that ass

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