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"-----Tonite Is The Nite-----"
A Phinest and lilrazor Collaboration


  lilrazor:

----------Tonite Is The Nite----------

-----Filling Me Up-----


Damn!!! She got everyone in the room staring at her
Nice aura and she flirts like boyfriends they were
They drool and tell her of the riches they got
She smiles and laughs and her eyes she bats
It amuses me that she leads them on like that
Truth be told that she's not materialistic and doesn't need stacks
I know what she really wants and am willing to trade
She walks over to me and a emotional conversation was made
The guys get jealious and start whispering to the air
The space between me and her mind seem to get smaller
She wanted to go to another place and talk some more..................

  Phinest:

......he caught my eye by surprise....
i was in belief that i was once again going to leave... alone
there was no man dat i cud eva call home
but he step in and he gave me pleasure in a different area
my mind...which was indulged in a mental fucking
thoughts i neva thought exisited was quickly rearin their head
i believe the next phase shud involve a bed
i took his hand....led him to another place
a place that an order to make it work...cudn't be no space
where are bodys cud become one and a passionate pace
both of us cud be laced


  lilrazor:

The way she looked as she undressed my mind
The oil that made her bottle shape booty shine(lol)
This was way more than I could bargain for
But somehow it seemed right......
As my tongue ran across her valley of sweets
As she began to let out small moans telling me to go deep
Twisting and turning my tongue deeper and deeper
As my mind is telling me to freak her and freak her
vividly tasting her scent on my taste buds
My dick standing up straight...I can't take no more
Throwing her on the bed and gently kissing her neck
Laying down the smack down in her honey bees nest
juices overflowing and sweat and passion thick
Rammimg her pussy like a kid poking ants with a stick
So tight and good it felt while I showed her my status
Lifting her body up and holding her like the world and atlas
Still my hunger for more of her grow.......

  Phinest:

the passion he ignited n me
the thrill he incited in me
made me wild beyond my knowledge
those lips
when we kissed it was like honey on my tongue
sweet......made me wonder..is he like dis wit everyone else
he cudnt b cuz he wit me
and one thrust he was inside of me
explorin my inner secrets
revealin them n an unspoken passion
dat only the 2 of us understood
i neva knew i cud
have love dat first nite....

  lilrazor:

So wet and moist it was
Gripping my dick her pussy does
Growing bigger and bigger with her passion
Trojan latex on the tip and in action
I got the sweetest satisfaction....
But unspoken words were asking
Could she be my everything?
Going deeper stroking her life, making it fit like a ring
I want to be her king
And life and death were fused by all means
......My dick explodes and it's too late to pull out
I actually want to be a father and a cool one no doubt
But the look on her face seems to be in shock
will her love for this nite take off like a flock?
i smile and ask her how she feels bout me
And she replies..........

  Phinest:

forever with you was worth the wait....

  lilrazor:

Now she got me feeling like uncle buck
Tonite Is The Nite she was Filling Me Up



p.s. hahahhahahahahahahha we killed it
p.s.s. i wonder if I meant wat I wrote(insider)*lol*
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Date Submitted: Mar 14, 2009 (02:37 PM)
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  Dreka Babii
07/06/09 (03:37 PM) 
wow!!!! that was great!!!

  3rd_Coast
04/13/09 (06:48 PM) 
DAMN this joint is straight fire. great scribe. great collab. Yall both did yall thing on this one no doubt.

  Lique
03/16/09 (12:41 PM) 
y'all did more than kill this one...the way y'all unconsciencely set this up it's crazy...rzr...you kept it 100% about the moment covering almost every aspect and describing it PERFECTly and Phinest...you kept it trill from a lady's mindset THROUGHOUT the entire rip...especially toward the end when he was staying in the moment you were keeping us in YOUR mind...y'all were amazing...ya put ur feet in this one!!

  SoulofNY
03/15/09 (12:59 PM) 
This was a tight scribe ya'll did ya'll thing keep writing most definitely

  C. Renegade
03/14/09 (10:01 PM) 
this right here is a hot peice... cool as write can feel it def.

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