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"Too Long"
  by Cryssy-Rashad


So what did you think I was going to do huh?

Just part ways like the release of two jail inmates?

Just walk away, no looking back as we leave the place?

I’m sorry but it’s just not going to go down like that

It’s just that we put in way too much into this relationship

Our love is like money in a joint bank account we made together and

If we give it time the interest will grow if we just be patient.

Being the woman that I am I just don’t give up easily and

Two things that I refuse to let go of are my man & my money…

Together our love has accumulated billions of dollars

That we have become gold diggers within ourselves

But don’t worry about me taking it all away & leaving you

Because like Otis said in the song, “I’ve been loving you too long to stop now.”

Its no way possible that I will…I refuse to...


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Date Submitted: Oct 18, 2009 (04:27 AM)
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  C,08
11/15/09 (03:15 PM) 
100% how i feel bout my ex. Hate her. But think bout everything i gave up 4 her, n everything i put in i want her back. Gud shit mommy

  Lady_Style
10/22/09 (07:41 AM) 
Ahhh fightin for love...hold on to it if it\'s worth the fight! Nicely penned =)

  Da Darkest Ari...
10/18/09 (08:52 PM) 
O M G i don\'t know where to start lol but just like your man and your money they\'re both replaceable...... what\'s the point of having money and you don\'t spend it ..... what\'s the point of havin a man with out the relationhip>>???

  blakkrose
10/18/09 (05:25 PM) 
Go head mama and qet yo man. Most definitely a relatable scribe.

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