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"TOOK ME TO HEAVEN"
  by oj


Last night when we made love
You sent me up above
to heaven
As the pearly gates opened for me to enter
The scent of love blew past me like the breeze in the winter
As I walk my bare feet into the road paved with gold
It felt so warm and look so beautiful
As I hear the sounds of harps
As they play to the beat of my heart
It sended me
Into tranquility
Then I saw an angel that resembled you
And I know its' unbelieveable and too good to be true
But
believe me
I went to heaven
And it was all because of you
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Date Submitted: Jan 02, 2008 (05:38 PM)
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  Tha 1 and only...
03/22/08 (06:38 PM) 
Whoa now!... U jus dont put stuff up there like that! U dont kno wat that type of stuff can do 2 people. lol!....jus kiddin. I luv it. I wish I had a man 2 take me 2 heavenand back!Soooo sensual! But on tha real keep up da good work! 8 STAR

  FAZ
02/22/08 (06:42 PM) 
yo this is ten starz right here short and good at the same time

  L18
01/24/08 (12:29 PM) 
I love this! This got me feelin' some type of way! You are a great poet! I'm glad you asked me to read this!

  blade
01/20/08 (02:48 PM) 
I like alot,very sensual.

  mindigoblue
01/20/08 (02:44 PM) 
This is nice. Good to know that u don't mind showing your sensitive side.

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