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"Took My Life"
  by PsycopathicKlown


you ripped my heart out
through my veins and my chest
i knew you were gonna leave me
cuz our love wasnt the best

i want you back
more than ever
but i cant have you
cuz you dont wont me back

i can understand were your coming from
when you said i done it more than once
the first time meant nothing
the second time was bullshit

even though were not together
i still love you more than anything
and i will always be here
for a second chance


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Date Submitted: Jul 25, 2007 (02:32 PM)
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  psychopathiclo...
08/20/07 (10:07 AM) 
hey heather nice poem took alot of thought if u get the chance coem look at my poems and blog! love u sis and miss you alot

  nighty
08/02/07 (06:50 PM) 
Shit happens in relationships. Noone is a saint.It was brave to fess up you were wrong. In most poems I read alot of people try coming off as being the righteous one. I'm even guilty of that from time to time.

  williesidney
07/30/07 (05:13 AM) 
I went back over this one I liked it alot. We all have hurts and fears but we just have to run to God and ask for his grace and love to guide us through. You keep up the good work and if you ever have the chance check out my other work, have a bless day.

  williesidney
07/28/07 (04:09 PM) 
Good write I really liked it aloy fave you 10 stars

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