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"TORN "REMiXX""
  by Alexis Cardeeezy


TORN iN BETWEEN THE TWO
WiSHiNG i COULD BE WiTH YOU
DONT KNOW WHAT i NEED TO DO
STiLL SEARCHiN FOR THE ONE THATS TRUE
A PART OF ME SAYiN THAT HE AiNT EVEN WORTH A TRY
A PART OF ME SAYiN THAT MAYBE YOU MiGHT BE THE GUY
i DONT KNOW iF YOU STiLL KEEPiN REAL WiTH ME OR NOT
SOMETHiNS TELLiN ME TO LOOK AT WHAT i REALLY GOT
i DONT KNOW iF i SHOULD STiLL KEEP STAYiNG AROUND
OR BE WiTH HiM AND TAKE SOME TiME JUST TO SETTLE DOWN
BUT YOUR MY TOP PiCK, ALWAYS WiLL HAVE MY HEART
ONLY ONE i TRUST TO NEVER EVER TEAR APART
AND i KNOW i NEED TO TAKE SOME TiME TO THiNK THiS THROUGH
SO LATER iN MY LiFE i WONT BE SO TORN iN BETWEEN THE TWO.
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Date Submitted: Nov 01, 2009 (05:54 AM)
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  ghettoholidai9...
11/01/09 (04:32 PM) 
dam hot write for ya first time well maybe it aint da way you wrote i likes it doe keep it real

  G.A.
11/01/09 (06:08 AM) 
nice drop indeed.. for me this is somethin that i believe we all can relate to in some kind of way..

  Alexis Cardeee...
11/01/09 (05:55 AM) 
THERE'S A PART 2.

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