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""Tossing and Turning""
  by Sincere6026


When I’m tossing and turning
I’m blushing that I’m yearning
Just to be a part of your life
As I lay my head in this bed
Thinking about what you said
When you told me you wanted to occupy a spot in my life
I thought, “Damn, that’s funny” because I fantasized about becoming his wife
But like I said,
It’s only when I’m tossing and turning, blushing that I’m yearning, just to be a part of your life
As my valley becomes wet, thinking that we’ve met
And I wake up and realize that it was all a dream
Can’t wait for the day I see your face so I can scream
But like I said,
It’s only when I’m tossing and turning, blushing that I’m yearning, just to be a part of your life
As I lay my head in this bed thinking about what you said
When you told me you wanted to do right by me
Cheezin at the sound of that on one knee
But like I said,
It’s only when I’m tossing and turning, blushing that I’m yearning, just to be a part of your life
As I lay here "guessing" that a "confession" will grant me a "blessing" if I tell you how I really feel
I’m afraid to let my guard down with you, and that’s what’s real
I’m embarrassed that we’ve never dated and I’m already imagining how it would be as your wife
That’s why I keep telling you that it’s ONLY when I’m tossing and turning, blushing that I’m yearning, just to be a part of your life.
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Date Submitted: Apr 02, 2008 (10:17 PM)
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  Dawn
07/31/08 (08:58 AM) 
Really nice write..Hope he finds out this lifetime that you feeling em..don't let time slip by...One love on this one..

  H.H. Holloway
07/30/08 (11:19 PM) 
Wordplay was very chameleon-like--you dipped in and out of metaphor and madrigal style like a snake in camouflage--a disarming love poem in the guise of a longing love note--this had "Distant Lover" written all over it--Beautiful--10!!!

  the love giver
07/08/08 (12:07 PM) 
this was on poin this is a good pome 10 stars

  WIZ
05/20/08 (09:23 AM) 
wow! thats a hot rite, just tell him, just maybe you could of had him sooner? nice flow and greata job!

  Care-Bear
05/16/08 (01:02 PM) 
look for real you know you be doing yo thang. i dont even think i can critique you well i know i cant cuz its speechless. it seems like this came so easily for you...luved it.

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