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"Track 1"
  by Bratt


i put my pen my paper but nuthin seems to pan out
all i can think to say is i love you , what do i say now?
you got me so emotional, my feelings are overridin',
for you i put my jersey up, for you i'm ride or dyin'
you mean so much to me-i want the whole world to see it-
guilty or innocent for you ima pled it-
shootin up the block or doin 5-2-10,
ima do it as your girl also do it as your friend,
like bonnie-n-clyde the world we'll be conquerin',
hatin on us, your death warrant you'll signin',
i keep my hands clean, so---
your blood i'll be hustlin'
But put your hands on grove and personally in your casket i'll lye you in{bitch}
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Date Submitted: Aug 24, 2009 (08:09 PM)
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  So1o
08/24/09 (08:51 PM) 
Nice concept but you should've proofread this piece. You wanted the whole "world" to see it right? Also I think you focused more on rhyming than actually getting your point across. You don't have to rhyme every line. That turns the reader off sometimes. But none the less I'll stay tuned for track 2 if you plan to write it ;)

  datboyjada
08/24/09 (08:35 PM) 
dis was nice lil mama. like how u prove to be dis woman who has her man back

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