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"Trance"
A Planted Daisies and Cornfed Collaboration


  Cornfed:

Sitting here with this half empty vodka bottle in my hand
My mind cast back to visions of you standing there
With that deceptive little smile on your face
Tempting me
Teasing me to follow your alluring lead
Daring me to take that one step beyond
Your eyes dance in your head like satun's fire
You trance my soul to places I have never before been
I drink to forget
But thoughts of you are always throbbing in my head
Pounding your name
Over and over again
TEMPTATION
You smile and I feel your heat
You breath I hear your hushed pants
You pass I smell your sweet devine
I feel you when you are not even here
Stuck in this globe of you
Endless thoughts
Endless nights
Of T E M P T A T I O N

  Planted Daisies:

I drink to forget all the marks
That you left in my flesh
When satisfaction was brought on by pain
You have left imprinted on my brain
Causing my heart
To speed up out of control
Just at the mere sound of your voice
Even though you are a distant dream
In my mind you will always be

You have left me
H E L P L E S S
Powerless in your sight
I am left to feel out of control
Cause my body craves for your touch
Even though you are miles apart
My mind is lost in this trance
Where it runs in a loop
Memories of you in my past
Caressing me
Pleasing me
Making my body
Your prisoner for the taking..

  Cornfed:

As the lighting flashs and the thuder rumbles
I see you in the shadows of the room
Floating like a ghost rafter to rafter
The memory of you
The essence of you
You drive the track of my mind
Over and over again
You have become a
A B S E S S I O N
I wake and you are there
I sleep you are there
I lace my mind with anything
To drive you out and away
Why do you huant me so
What have I done to be cursed this way
Others have tryed to take your place
They say I call them by your name
They say I love and only preform for you
Your gone
Your the past
Why won't you set my reminisce free
Your body
Your mind
Your soul
Devour me whole in A B S E S S I O N

  Planted Daisies:

Causing my body to tremble
As I am laying down to sleep
Visions of you haunting me
When all I want is to end this tormenting dream
Of you taking my body hostage
Controlling me
Seducing me
When all I want is for it to end
With every sip I take
You gently kiss my body
And with it you gain more and more of me
D E V O U R I N G M E
Til I have no room to see
That you have made me
Your temple
Your home
As I try to drink you away
You have made your last stance
Causing me to be now and forever in your trance....

  Cornfed:

My brain divided
My heart sliding into dispute
Your driving whats left of me
To thoughts of of naked you
Back to the start of
S E D U C T I O N
You knew your charms and dearth
But didn't know mine
We mixed a demons stew
That engulfed us both to implulsive frenzy
We lost our selves in each other
We lost our hearts and minds to this hysteria of passion delirium of emotion
The journey to the edge has left both demented and detached
I crave you with lusty nightmares and daytime phantasm
I am waton in you
I am lascivious for your immoral radius
But a last the wedge was driven
Now and never will we see
We as one is not to be
I drag this chair to the middle of the room
This insanity I shall end
Belt to beam wrap around my neck
I profess my love for you
I step forward to end this
S E D U C T I O N

  Planted Daisies:

And as I leap visions of you
Stream across my head
B L I N D I N G M E
Til the very end
Hoping to release myself
From your possession
Now that you have brought upon my demise
I smile back in victory
Now I am unbound
From the chains of your slavery
Removing this trance
Had become my neverending story......

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Date Submitted: May 18, 2009 (08:51 AM)
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  danceluv
09/18/09 (05:37 AM) 
all i can say is sensational..temptation..amazing collab. flawless

  ohmi
07/30/09 (11:17 AM) 
Addiction to passion's fleshly fruits, or allusions to life as one spirit, one quest to be one being , poetry delights to explore the mataphor and the reality in delightful ambiguity and the heat of life's distractions from our homeward toil. Nice poetry and seamlessly joined as if as one in this fair message to the world about its ways and that we all go beyond its velvet-lined cascade of snares , just learning through our tears so many years until all fears are gone. Free to love without the...
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  Chainz.
07/12/09 (01:36 PM) 
all i can say is great collaboration on both sides.. keep writing 10 stars

  stranger
06/25/09 (10:06 PM) 
rolling and weaving... nice interaction there ... :)

  Princess_Tatia...
06/17/09 (09:51 AM) 
wow thi spoem great really sold ur emotions deeply here i was loving readin had me concertratin like never before dyin to know what the reply would be and this was very intrigin loved it alot.

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