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"Treasure"
  by Magic


Life iz full of many treasures ~
We cannot count them all,
We’ll find them, too, in goodly measure,
They come in sizes great and small.

Some can be seen, and others heard,
And some we can feel and touch.
But the ones that come from the sense appeal
We forget to label as such.

Some choose money, or jewels as treasure
Some like riches and wealthy estates,
So it all depends on the person
To what treasure he or she wants to relate.

But the love we get as we pass through life
Iz something we cannot buy.
If a price could be set on this treasure ~
I am sure it would come quite high.

There are treasures that are equally precious ~
A good mind, good health, good friendz,
These will always be treasures to cherish
Until life on this good earth endz.

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Date Submitted: Jul 04, 2009 (12:00 AM)
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  Lil Mamma Rena
10/01/09 (12:23 AM) 
well i just found one...a diamond in poetry lol......you are an amazing poet and much love and respect is being sent ur way

  Kunspikuous
07/17/09 (07:31 PM) 
great piece. we should all be thankful for what we have.

  i.monae
07/17/09 (02:59 PM) 
I like how you used "treasure" as a metaphor for so many things that are neglected in life and things that are materialistic that shouldn't matter. This poem sends out a great message that most people need to take notice of. I just felt that "endz" wasn't the right choice to make because this is such a powerful poem for life. Great Job!

  Poetic Lyricis...
07/17/09 (02:33 PM) 
This is why we should always be greateful for what we have and appreciate the fruits of life..this was awesome and the backdrop was perfect for this piece...10stars

  Brian Ardoin
07/10/09 (03:15 AM) 
Man.. this one came out perfect.. simply perfect. Fav.

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