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"t-rex tears"
  by ♂ .ej.brklyn.bred.





[song called so emotional... originally sung by one chance...
performed by.... well, yanno- excuse the ending]


t-rex tears
by eryk jaycob

perfunctory courtesies, departing with curtsies and bows
ill-fated duo too proud to flash internalized frowns...
so smiles prance around the angles of their mouths,

as adieus are bid...

sourly slid from tastebuds too bitter to give...
an honest truth...
a simple..
i
can't
be
with-
out
you

sulking fools, the two
whom walk blindly into a frostbitten world...

without the comfort of thermos'd love..
the pair remain frozen,
un-gloved...


sadly shoved within territory...
vulnerable to secular assaults...

to wonder..
who is at fault..

is to question

who unlocked forever's vault, retrieved their creed and murdered their oath?


the one whom cries t-rex tears...


the criminals?


them





both.




[written for a friend]

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Date Submitted: Jul 07, 2008 (11:28 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (14)
  J skillz
07/14/08 (02:09 AM) 
wow.... this is tight please keep up the writing oh and i couldn't hear the track but i got the plow of it just from reading it keep up the great writes poet thanks for the inspiration

  Mz Prose
07/11/08 (11:08 PM) 
damn ... you are just ill ...

  --->QUEENPIN O...
07/10/08 (11:45 PM) 
AND WHY CAN I NOT HEAR THE FUCKIN AUDIO!!!!????? WHY EVERYTIME I COME 2 UR PAGE UR SHIT FUCKS UP ON ME??? U TELL UR SHIT 2 SHUT DOWN IF I COME AROUND EJ??? >:/ LOL

  --->QUEENPIN O...
07/10/08 (11:43 PM) 
sulking fools, the two whom walk blindly into a frostbitten world... without the comfort of thermos'd love.. the pair remain frozen, un-gloved... <----U REALLY DO AMAZE ME WITH THE SHIT U COME UP WITH...THAT WAS...WOW....I GOT SUCH A FEELING OF PAIN FROM THAT...DAMN!!!

  Neurotically I...
07/08/08 (02:41 PM) 
man...this was a wonderful heartfelt...and mm hmm i see you singing hittin dem notes...nicely scribed

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