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"Tropical Storm"
  by Mr. RTJ


Tropical storm showering
Attacking the erect leaves and blades of grass
Until the leaves and blades of grass go limp

Crash!

Thunder and lightening appear
Screeching screams echo across the forest plain
Momentarily overlapping the rain drops

Drips sliding down the brown bark of each tree
Slowly trickling off the lip of each branch

More rain

Harder rain

Now pouring rain

Such flooding rain
Gaining momentum

Screeching screams of wind and thunder become louder
Taking a voice of their own
Building from a whimper
Erupting in an Earth shaking outburst

Such powerful lightening
Teaming with the wind knock a mighty Oak
Dropping it down to its knee

A disfigured stump
Caught in this tropical storm’s war path

Limp leaves rustle
Swaying back and forth
To and fro
Seemingly wiping the rain from bark

Puddles formulate

Lifeless streams irrigate

A force not of Mother Nature’s creation to mediate

Take notice
Observe the source of such storm

The never ending
Sorrow filled
Downpour

The angry
Relentless lightening

The depressed wail of wind and thunder

When you gaze into that tropical sky
You are gazing into my eye
Because without you
I scream
And I cry

10/10/2007




{Author's note: I'm attempting to tap into my emotions through metaphysical means. Can only go up from here.}
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Date Submitted: Oct 10, 2007 (10:39 PM)
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  ShezsFrsh_Y@D!...
10/12/08 (04:07 PM) 
"screeching screams of wind and thunder become louder taking a voice of their own building from a whimper erupting in an earth shaking outburst"-like ive said before your imagery play here is beautiful, such a vivid picture...nice write....much love always!

  MissyBody22
10/03/08 (08:41 PM) 
Oh my goodness...this is seriously deep. There's nothing more I can say...

  GOD_OF_WAR_7
06/27/08 (06:11 PM) 
Definitely monumental and heartfelt. The metaphore of describing the torrential downpours of you needing she. Flawless masterpiece and definitely a fav.............

  Lynx
05/04/08 (05:17 PM) 
wow, really deep, dope imagery, You had me guessing what dis poem was about from start to finish, Cuz i mean the stuff I read from u, things arent always literal, so to use the power of tropical nature as a metaphor for ur emotions was genius, I would have never thought about it dis way, good appreciation for the forces of nature, this was so dope man, dont stop writing

  1m m3
12/29/07 (02:57 PM) 
i really like this poem.. it got me thinkin in a different way now

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