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"TROUBLE IN PARADISE"
  by fr3$h P


you got a relationship so strong dr.phil refers to y'all to the population.
you've had your share of downs but never has it brought suspicions
nature's thrown all sorts of obstacles but the love is damn near perfection
based on y'all's relation other folk search for mental instructions
while other folk are prayin for the day of y'alls conclusion
now she starts gettin some attention and flirtation
intrusions of flirtation compliments in her mind bring confusion.
she's forgetten those lonely nights without his company
she swore she could trade the world just to bare his company.
now that she has his company she decides it's not what she wants.
she's forgotten all the obstacles they've faced together.
viewers no longer seek word of knowledge neither.
what appears on his facial spheres is the disappear of tranquility
stress, fatigue, sleeping disorders are now his disability
reminiscing on how him and her used to bare a great deal of serenity
his body starts to get frail
now his mind's always idle
she's hurting twice because now she can feel how bad she's hurtin him.
ladies and gentlemen there's trouble in paradise
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Date Submitted: May 16, 2008 (12:00 PM)
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  Iaintgot1
01/20/09 (05:07 AM) 
Oh wow...what is a sister to say? This is really good! Wonderfully written. You are a great poet. Simply put. Keep it coming. Ten stars. A definite favorite for me.

  PRZPOETiCNENA
01/11/09 (02:15 AM) 
wow pa thats deep... :) i give it 10 stars

  Samanthar
01/10/09 (05:37 AM) 
i like that presentation...the beginning was sweet and then the middle kind of hits you, the emotions got across well... 10 starz.

  Cedez
07/13/08 (07:03 PM) 
good flow and a hot write 10 starz

  Quite
07/11/08 (02:58 PM) 
good flow u have skills cuz

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