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"True Love Came to Me"
  by highoffdasoundofreal


In the midst of all this insanity
You came to me unaffected
Giving me my first taste of true love
You are my mental and my physical
I paint colorless images of you in my mind
Because with you I see no color
Or no race and most importantly, no boundaries
You are my first and last
The fire that continuously burns within my soul
The water that flows abundantly throughtout my body
The earth that holds me up when I become weak in knees
And the wind that lifts me so that I can fly
When mymind has been tainted and I feel betrayed
By the negativity of those who I thought were closest to me
You assure me that that my existence is nessary without them
So without you I have no purpose
I want desperately because you are bliss in me
That rids me of all my insecurites
My heart and soul is what I give to you
And though my feelings are uncomprendable
To those who have not experience you

All I can really say is...

I LOVE YOU
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Date Submitted: Sep 08, 2007 (02:23 PM)
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  IndiaNicole
11/20/08 (03:48 PM) 
i gotta fav this up, truly beautifuk and unique 10starz

  Sie7e
11/18/08 (02:11 PM) 
It was a really passionate write i truly enjoyed reading it. I actually dont have anything to say at all.

  Cudjoe
09/27/08 (07:15 PM) 
i like thiis alot it just grab my attention really firmly and therefor i love it

  CHEESEY BREAD
09/16/08 (12:24 PM) 
good stuff 10 all day

  Living Legend ...
09/16/08 (12:17 PM) 
dame ma this was a really hot write. i loved it.. the concept was great. nicely done much love

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