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"Trust in love"
  by jaysin


I said I don’t care about her history
I want her just for me
But she wont let my past go
Upset about my past hoe’s
Snapping because of my last hoe
At night I hold her
Tighter then a lasso
She doesn’t want to let me go
But she’s pissed
because of what she knows
Missing the fact that
I don’t want them hoe’s
She got me walkin around
With a open nose
I Hope my window
Of opportunity doesn’t close
Because without her
im left in the cold
Alone to grow old
Livin life like a miserable soul
On my knees saying
Baby please don’t go
Please don’t leave
Stay and love me
Please say you love me
Got me beggin
for her to love me
I want her more
then money and weed
I see more then pussy
I wish she
Would see
What she
really means to me
Since I started loving her
My soul has been free
I gave her my heart
she’s the lock Im the key
If I lose her
Whats the point of me
I wont let no one else
get this close to me
Me and her
that’s how its suppose to be
I want her to trust love
To Trust her love for me
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Date Submitted: Oct 25, 2007 (12:21 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 10/27/07 (12:15 PM)
Author: drzprincess
Poem Title: Its Hard To Trust In...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (18)
  DariaAkasha
02/14/08 (11:09 PM) 
man im feelin this...i ono what mo to say

  vincygyal
12/23/07 (05:21 PM) 
wow i like this alot very good write ten stars **********

  trinabeana
11/02/07 (04:07 PM) 
hot shit jay! very hot shit..this poem is written beautifully and I hope she can realized that the love you got for her is the truth..10strs this is a beautiful write!

  I-ROC
11/01/07 (02:40 AM) 
hot shit i feel ya!!!!!

  im luvin me no...
10/31/07 (01:50 AM) 
boyyyyy!!!! this shit right here done gave me the damn chills...you kno you be ending your writes wit a bang this was great and trust me when i say i can relate to it!!!loved it 10*

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