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"Truth Hurts"
  by Sexxy Scorp


Sittin on the train writing my thoughts

Fighting against time but its all my fault

Running late, praying hard

The rain keeps pouring yet I disreguard

Thinkin on yesterday, an ugly turn out

Two close associates, a hurtful fallout

Did I do the right thing? But I just spoke my mind

I had to tell him like it was cause he was gettin out of line

Once he crossed it, it was finished

He should've kept it to himself, look what happened

But on the other hand I'm glad he's gone

I feel so free so it couldn't be wrong

He stormed out in anger, his whole face changed

His face turned scorchin red, he looked derranged

But today is another day, and yesterday was confusing

But to most of my friends it was quite amusing

I just don't get why he could be mad

All cause I told him he was old enough to be my dad

Truth Hurts huh?
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Date Submitted: Sep 25, 2007 (03:37 PM)
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  terrenababii
03/04/08 (05:59 PM) 
lmao this was cutee, fun, && silly i lovee the ending it was perfect, and kinda unexpected too i thought it was gonna be something like real serous like "ooh my heart is broken he did dis and i did dat and we did dis and dat blah blah blah" but it was a nice lil twist to it. :) nice write xoxo ♥terrena

  Da Darkest Ari...
03/04/08 (03:30 PM) 
Wow..............lol i loved it loved it to the 100 power lol...........Why was he so mad he knew what he'd done.............This is most def goin on my favs..........10 starzz up poet keep it flowin

  Will charles
10/11/07 (05:49 PM) 
lol, great flow, and very poetic. The ending is just hilarious, your very creative. This was a good and amusing write

  Nek-Nek
10/02/07 (02:52 PM) 
LMAO. that is funny. I like it though. I had to do the same thing once 2 this dude that was like 40. I feel ya. keep doin you

  piss a mofo of...
09/27/07 (08:31 AM) 
hahahahahaha...well if the truth hurts say....OUCH! i (like mz.candy) thought you broke up with him & he couldn't take it..never expected the ending..again love your scribes POET!

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