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"Truth Is Reality"
  by crippled_enigma
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Truth by Deszaun King


You see,

The reason they ask the questions
To answers they don't know
Is because they believe they're aware of everything
They think they know where to go
But when the path leads to nowhere
And these little children are lost
They later find out in life
That it's their lives that pay the cost

But

I've spoken about truth before
And always had alot to say
Even if the scums of the world
Will never see it my way
They could crawl in a hole
And leave me the f--k alone
While I leave this world behind
And go out on my own

Life is Hard

Life is hard but you gotta keep moving
No turning back to let the silly minded prevail
Just to stand there and pose a question is a limit
"Y" is a letter with a funny-looking tail
Truth, my friend, is the essence of reality
It proves the real and the obviously accurate
While lies are just the death of life
Truth is a lie's immaculate

Equal
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Date Submitted: Aug 17, 2009 (09:34 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/17/09 (10:11 PM)
Author: Deszaun King
Poem Title: Why i

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comment icon  COMMENTS (3)
  DPoet
08/24/09 (11:11 AM) 
First off all you didn’t Leave a comment on none Of my poems I looked it up So you got me fucked up Weak ass punk Can’t even come real So you gotta make shit up I must admit that in that write I almost felt sorry for you But you see I know better Cuz I knew what I knew you uninspiring AZZ Bitch you ain’t no mystery ..........And enigma??? Please You just a broken down nigga And the only thing crippled Is that lame ass pen So before you come a...
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  s0uth3rn g1rl
08/18/09 (03:20 PM) 
Loved the last stanza, so much truth behind it! Loved these lines (Life is hard but you gotta keep moving...No turning back to let the silly minded prevail...Just to stand there and pose a question is a limit..."Y" is a letter with a funny looking tail) you killed it on that one!! nice write!

  touchdapearl2
08/18/09 (02:00 PM) 
That very first verse said so much more then you might think.....when i think of truth there it is....you killed this write!

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