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"TRY THIS ONE MORETIME"
  by Ranica


WHEN WE BROKE Up ALL I WANTED TO DO WAS CRY
BUT IT WAS MA FAULT WE BROKE UP & I KEEP ASKIN MA SELF WHY?

I THOUGHT ABOUT YOU EVERYNIGHT,AFTERNOON,AND DAY
THINKIN 2 MYSELF COULD HE BE FEELIN THE SAME WAY?

THEN I FINAL REALIZED WE WERE THREW
CAUSE I HEARD ABOUT YOU OUT HERE CALLIN THEM OTHER HOES BOO...

2 MONTHS OF HURTIN AND OF PAIN
BUT THEN RELIZING THAT THIS THING CALLED LOVE IS JUST A GAME

BUT THE OTHER DAY YOU CALLEED TALKIN ALL NICE & SWEET
AND EVERYTIME YOU SAID''I STILL LOVE''YOU MA HEART SKIPPED A BEAT.

SO WHAT AM I TO DO????

SHOULD I GET BACK WIT YOU CAUSE I STILL CARE
OR LEAVE YOU ALONE CAUSE I FEEL LIKE YOUR LOVES NOT REALLY THERE?

SHOULD GET BACK WIT YOU AND BE YO DOWN ASS TRAP BITCH AGAIN
OR SHOULD I LEAVE HOW IT IS SINCE OTHER BITCHES STILL OUT HERE CALLIN YOU THEY MAN?

BUT IF YOU GON DO THIS AGAIN WE GOTTA KEEP REAL, GET OFF THE GAMES, AND REALLY TRY 2 MAKE THIS SHIT HAPPEN ONCE MORE....

I GUESS WE GOTTA GET IT TOGETHER AND TRY TO MAKE US WORK
AND WHATEVER HAPPENS JUST HAPPENS...........................
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Date Submitted: Jul 05, 2007 (05:04 PM)
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  Lyricist~4~Lyf...
11/26/07 (09:59 AM) 
wow, this a good write. i hope u don't see REAL Love as a game tho, cause Love ain't nothin' to play wit (mos def ain't a "break-it-u-buy-it kinda deal when the heart is concerned). but yeah, some folk do b playin' dem games tho, thass when u gotta say "game-over' tho, feel me? 10 stars

  WEVY
07/06/07 (09:45 PM) 
WOW THIS SOUNDS LIKE ME AND MY EX DEVIN WEN WE BROKE UP ALL I COULD THIMK BOU WAS WHAT DID I DO WRONG BUT IT WASENT ME IT WAS ALL HIM 4 MONTH HE STILL BE CALLING TALKING BOU HOW HE WANT ME TO BE HIS DOWN ASS CHICK BUT I CANT PUT MY SELF BACK IN THAT FIRE I JUST GOT TO LATE THE FLAME DIE DOWN BUT NICE WRITE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

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