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"Turn Down The Silence"
  by Touch of Hope


this space between is far too wide
i mean your nose is practically touching mine
and boy are we recycling breath right
i inhale your exhale and vice versa
boy is it loud in here
between what you're not saying
or at least what im not hearing
this silence is deafening
i cant even hear myself think in here
but its ok because im almost completely relaxed
i mean from the sweat on my brow
and the way my eyes are scanning the room
cant you tell i wanna be here
i mean for real baby turn down on the silence
itz begining to bounce off the walls and back to my ears
and i cant take it anymore
i need to hear you
i need to hear you say that you need me as much i need you
and that you want me as much i want you
but for crying out loud please turn down the silence
cuz itz wut ur not saying thatz killing me
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Date Submitted: Sep 09, 2007 (08:36 PM)
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  Mz. G.M.B
09/10/07 (12:04 AM) 
i like this concept...i feel the same way...i HATE that silence stuff...but nice write

  joeny
09/09/07 (11:37 PM) 
I have been in that spot where silence is louder then the boom of a shot gun blast. keep writing, this is one of the better poems I have read on this site

  candy-b
09/09/07 (08:41 PM) 
talented you are...this is a creative piece and it definitely has 10 star potential and that is what it deserves

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