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"Two Swords"
  by AR-15
  - This Poem is a response to the poem hand on trigger by ARCH ANGEL


Two swords battled and two swords slain
One stabbed my heart, the other stabbed the brain
All the pain endured, drives an insane soul insane
Angels fighting roses, ironic I suppose
When God created both to rid the world of it's woes
But then angel and the rose turn to sword and then chose
To add to the world of evil by spreading the ghettosoul
I'll never understand the conflict at hand
Maybe because the confusions adds to the
Ones in demand
Death comes to us all, but in different forms of fate
If words are the way, then carry on till the death of bones
Because I'll take a million sticks and stones to kill mine
Before I let a word from my brothers dirty my cleansed design
Edged on, and pressed on, the iron skillet burns
As the two swords before me, builds the stomach churn
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Date Submitted: Jul 18, 2009 (03:46 PM)
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  ButterflyDream
07/25/09 (06:26 PM) 
I loved the way you constructed this....such penetrating depth.nicely done:)

  todayistomorro...
07/24/09 (11:42 AM) 
i gotta agree wit D Benitez..this poem gives a leson...loved it...10

  D Benitez
07/21/09 (12:58 PM) 
I had to favor this one wow.. Alot to learn and it speaks high volumes about the way your thought process can be! Love the irony and the way you artiuclated this... Honestly this is a poem I would read a child and ask questions because it is providing a lesson to be learned and pondered upon... Well written and I agree love these lines "Two swords battled and two swords slain One stabbed my heart, the other stabbed the brain "

  smitty
07/19/09 (02:09 AM) 
very sick cuz. aything from the metaphors down 2 the message is hard my dude. deep!

  da black princ...
07/18/09 (11:45 PM) 
tHAT'S A GREAT PIECE. let's hope the message was recieved.

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