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"U AINT DA BOSS OV ME!!!!"
  by MAVRICK


IN THA BEGINNING IS HOW IT ALL STARTS
CRAWLING ON ALL FOURS, NO SHAMES, NO BROKEN HEARTS
U STAGGER, U FALL, NO REAL LOSS, THE ADVENTURE'S BRAND NEW
LET ME BUMP MY HEAD, SCRAPE MY LEGS, SCUFF UP THESE SHINEY SHOES
DONT TRY TO GUIDE ME, ITS NOT YOUR JOB
DONT TRY TO RE-MIND, RE-MEMBER, DIS-MEMBER, U CLOUD ME WITH YOUR FOG
DAMN ITS HOT!!! THAT LIGHT IS BRIGHT!!! THERE U GO ECLIPSING ME AGAIN
I CAN STAND THE HEAT, MY FIELD IS COMPLETE, DONT NEED YOUR DOUBTING ATTITUDE MY "FRIEND"
OHH U'RE MY LOOKOUT, THEN LOOKOUT BELOW
MY HEIGHT'S AT 2008, NAH, NOT THA DATE, DAMN MUTHAFUKA'S IS STILL SLOW
LARGE IS MY STATE-OF-BEING, SMALL IS YOUR CON-SCIOUS-LESS
I DONT NEED A PENNY FOR YOUR THOUGHTS, WHEN MY DOLLARS ALL MAKE SENSE,
MY BEGINNING WAS BE-COMING, MY MISSION WAS HEAVEN SENT
MY SPIRIT FLEW RIGHT PAST U, WHILE YOUR'S SAT IN QUICK DRYED CEMENT
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Date Submitted: Aug 22, 2008 (09:08 PM)
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  leethal
11/12/09 (03:20 AM) 
i had to come back and see where mav got his start. i was really diggin this joint. i can still smell that mav sarcasm oozin in this piece. i really enjoyed how you see this piece up in the begining wit the baby. i'm still mentally laughing at that image

  Jazzy Storm
10/22/09 (01:24 PM) 
man oh man, mav. you delivered as only you can. this joint right here is so hawt!!! i\'ve been here before on both ends of the stick, so i can certainly relate. i love the title--playful, but still deals with a very mature subject matter. kudos to you fellow scribe. continue to spill ink on \'em

  *urban^legacy*
10/20/09 (05:49 AM) 
yah that was hott the begaining reminded me of my homegirls kids doing wild shit but yah mad depth so much i\'am going to read this one again matter of fact i\'ll do just that an make it one of my fav\'s so i can read it to and from all the time homie on this u went balls out like ALL out!! great write as always

  Deandra
09/28/09 (05:43 AM) 
THIS IS A DEEP AND BEAUTIFUL POEM I LOVE UR WORD FLOW KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

  La✮Poet...
09/03/09 (07:25 PM) 
Mhm... Nice flow. Havent read you in a long while. That being said "I dont need a penny for your thoughs when my dollars make sense, i heard that, lol. Good stuff though. Enjoyed thee concept.

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